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Hmmm...don't take this the wrong way dude, but I think that this buildup could have been a little bit more creative than this. I was ex...


Now this was fairly creative indeed! The illustrations misleads the viewer to think she's gonna see the seal staring at her smiling...o...


This is way a good way to transition. While this technique is not original by any means, it still leaves the reader wondering "what's h...


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Babar vs the hunter and westboro baptist church 2
Now all of Celesteville was in a total panic! The hunter who they thought had perished years ago was alive and was out to revoke their protection rights so that he could hunt them all again! And the biggest non-conservatve hate group on earth and the second biggest (and most misognist) were on his side!
Naturally, all the citizens were swarming the palace asking Babar about what they were going to do. He had no idea so he eventually had the barricade the palace doors tight.
“Oh Celeste...” Babar said miserably. “I’m...I just have no idea what to do!”
“There there BAbar.” Celeste said kindly. “You’ve just been under so much stress.”
“I’m the king.” Babar said. “Everyone turns to ME for guidance...”
“We turned to you for guidance before you were king.” Celeste pointed out. “Do you remember when we were children and the hunter was after us? We probably all would have been dead if yo
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Babar vs the hunter and westboro baptist church 1
What happens when the 80s televisions most beloved elephant meets his not-quite dead old enemy and the world's biggest (and most infamous) non-conservative hate group? Hillarity!
“May I come out now Caleste?” King Babar called from inside his room.
“Not yet Babar.” Caleste replied.
“I don’t see why I’ve got to stay in here.” Babar said. “I mean who could possibly be coming that would require me to wait in here until they show up?”
“It’s a surprise.” Caleste replied.
Babar was confused. As the king of Calesteville, and the one who had saved his herd from the hunter  and introduced them to civilization, he deserved info on these matters.
All of a sudden, Babar's two trusted advisors, Cornelius and Pompadour showed up.
"I say Caleste, how is our king doing?" he asked.
"He's wondering why he has to stay in his room until the guest shows up." Caleste replied. "By the way, any news from madame?"
"She called an
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A real boat-ing service
Sequel to "A real-training school"
This is the story of Benjamin McGloat
a man whose wife we would not promote.
For she was a golddigger, one in plain sight.
She only married Ben cause he looked rich that night.
But upon finding out he really was poor
she wanted to leave right out the door
till she received an offer similar to that of Mrs. Ns.
Bringing more strife to a person again.
It’s time for another poem that will make you nervous!
The terrible secret of the McCreek boating service!
IT all started one hot Thursday afternoon.
A real hot day. Even for June.
Ben was working in the hot sun
since his office was being renovated? And it sure wasn’t fun.
But while doing so, his cell phone rang.
Seeing it was from his wife, he immediately sprang
right up on his feet and accepted the call.
He hoped he wouldn’t have to work outside in fall.
“Yes dear, it’s Ben.” he answered quickly.
His wife’s voice sounded really rather sickly.
“I heard that y
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gender flipped, age regressed, dollfied golddigger
“Let’s see...fake pearly whites, combed hair, fake muscles...and two tickets to to a Romantic Comedy. Everthug I need to lure that little bitch in!” Harry Q. Herbert thought to himself with glee as he prepared himself for his date with Diane Rankin (or rather, his TRAP).
As he locked his house up, he hopped the mercedes which he had “borrowed” and he headed off to the house. Now Diane was widowed three years ago, but had recently won the lottery and was a billionaire along with her five year old daughter Janie. The news soon reached the ears of Harry, who wanted just one thing in life: to live in a big mansion and have tons of money. But why work for it when you can just marry some rich bitch and get her cash all to yourself when she an dher kid have an....accident?
On the way to her house, he decided to stop by the store and get her a present: an emerald ring.
“Oh no Harry!” the cashier said. “I’ve told you a hundred times, no more
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Cheerleading is defintely a TG art 3
When Henry turned around, he saw that Kyle was enormous...or so it seemed.
“Kyle?!” Henry cried. “What...what the hell happened?1 You’re enormous!”
“Oh I wouldn’t say that Henrietta.” Kyle said grinning.
“Henrietta?” Henry cried. “What the hell are you talking about?!”
“No...that doesn’t sound good.” Kyle said. “Cindy! That’ll do!”
“Make sense Kyle!” Henry. snapped. “Where am I?! Where are you?!”
“I said I’d make a picture of you.” Kyle said. “And I did exactly that! Go look in that mirror over there!”
Henry went and gasped!
He was now looked exactly like Alice! Blonde hair down to shoulders, portugese, buxom, and with the cheerleader outfit!
“Wha...what happened?!” Henry cried.
“Sorry Cindy. You were a nice guy. But Mr. Dita doesn’t pay me to just make friends.”
“Wha...what does Mr. Dita ha
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Cheerleading is defintely a TG art 2
There was a big concert in town, were most of the guys in Henry’s dorm were off to. Perfect time to do the....experiment. After checking the coast was clear, Henry trotted off to Kyle’s dorm. He knocked.
“Hello?” Kyle called out.
“It’s me Henry.” Henry called. “Are you...ready?”
“Yeah, come on in.” said Kyle.
Henry opened the door and saw Kyle sitting at his desk. There were several paintings of  girls in his dorm.
“Um..you sure seem to have a way with girls...” Henry said.
“Girls find me irresitable.” he said. “That’s why I make art of them.”
“Well, let’s get this over with before the guys come back.” said Henry.
“Okay, sit over there and turn your back.” said Kyle. “And shirt off.”
“DO I need to...wear anything?” Henry asked.
“Oh no.” said Kyle. “No girls clothes will be necessary for this painting.
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Cheerleading is defintely a TG art 1
Henry Milton!” the art professor at Barronton University said.
“I can’t talk right now Mr. Dita, I have football practice!” Henry said leaving.
“Your coach has been informed. We need to talk.” Mr. Dita said crossly.
Henry gulped. He had a feeling why he was being called. He was captain of the school football team, and the star player...unfortunately, it was getting in the way of his studies...and art was no exception.
“Mr. Milton, you have failed to turn in a project for the FIFTH time this semseter!” Mr. Dita said unhappy.
“Professor, the coach is working us all like crazy!” Henry said in protest. “It’s our big game against the tornadoes and.....”
“Sports are not what college is for.” Dr. Dita said. “Sports are a passtime earned by students who do well in their studies. YOU Mr. Milton have not EARNED that privelege at all...so I’ve spoken to your coach and the dean...and we’re a
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Lyin terrorist play lion game
Evil Russian terrorist Vladimir Kazimir was approaching his secret hideout in Moscow Russia. Tonight was a very special meeting for he was planning to extract revenge on  someone he had loathed for years. When he arrived at the door, he checked that the coast was clear and knocked.
“Who is there?” his second in command  Lazar Kuchenko asked.
“It’s Kazimir you fool!” he snapped. “Vet me in!”
He opened the door and welcomed his boss in.
“How vas your vide over here sir?” he asked.
“It vas a close call.” he said taking off his sunglasses and wig he used to fool people. “A cop stopped me and I thought the jig vas up! But he just gave me a ticket for speeding. We shall deal with him later.
“The others are vaiting in the room.” Kuchenko said.
“Excellent.” he said. “Den vet us get down to business shall we?”
Kazimir entered the conference room and was greeted by his other thre
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Bluth TV biopic 5: American Tail 2
First draft so may not be perfect!
WE CUT TO BLUTH MEETING SOME ANIMATORS IN A STORYBOARD MEETING. SPIELBERG IS WATCHING.
BLUTH
Okay, now I apologize for the crudeness of these houses in the village. Spielberg’s gonna bring in some reall photos and you’ll have a better understanding of what to draw from there. But after the main credits, I want the camera to first take a shot of this house in Russia. Then it should cut to a sign on the door that says “Moskowitz” and fool the audience...and I do not want a zoom in shot of it...I want it only to zoom in for a few seconds, then do a cut take to the sign. Afterwitch, the camera moves down here in about 4 seconds to a sign that says “Mousekewitz” which is our hero Fievel AKA Philly’s home. Now afterwards, the first things we should see in the house is Papa playing the violin. And I do not mean first show us the furniture or the kids dancing and THEN Papa, Papa is first thing and I mean that. Now aft
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Bluth TV biopic 4: American Tail 1
CUT TO Rick Dyer, president of Advanced Microcomputer Systems. HE IS ON PHONE WITH DISTRIBUTOR FOR GAME.
DYER
Come on, “The Secrets of the Lost Woods” is bound to be a smash hit! It’s about a knight who...
UNNAMED DISTRIBUTOR
Dryer enough! We told you, it’s not for us!
DYER SIGHS. A WOMAN ENTERS.
WOMAN
Any luck?
DYER
No. I know the game’s bound to be a hit! We just don’t have anyone who thinks it will! But anyway, did you bring the figures over?
WOMAN
Yes. I hope you don’t mind sir, I had to bring my kids over. Couldn’t get a babysitter. I got a movie for them.
DYER NODS.
LATER DYER AND LADY ARE ALL WORKING ON PROJECT, WHEN DYER GOES OUTSIDE (FOR REASON TBA) AND SEES THEM WATCHING...THE SECRET OF NIMH. HE SMILES AT THE GAME....
DYER
Jane..get me whoever made this movie! I think I got us a solution!
CUT TO BLUTH MEETING WITH DYER FACE TO FACE.
BLUTH
A video game?
DYER
That’s right. It was originaly a multiplatformed one, but I feel t
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Bluth TV biopic 3: Quitting Disney and making Nimh
CUT TO COFFEE SHOP NEXT MORNING. GOLDMAN AND POMEROY ARE SITTING ACROSS FROM BLUTH AND HAVE SURPRISED LOOKS ON THEIR FACES.
POMEROY
You’re quitting your job at Disney?
BLUTH
That’s right John. I’m leaving to start my own animated movie company. And I want you and Gary to join me.
GOLDMAN
Bluth...nobody else makes animated movie except Disney! They’re....special!
BLUTH
They WERE special Gary. Not anymore. When I was a child, every kid in my class would be so psyched about Disney’s movies....Pinocchio, Dumbo....they spoke of those films all the time...and when Bambi came out...I saw all my classmates crying over Bambi’s mom’s death! The reason Disney is losing popularity is because they aren’t trying anymore! And it doesn’t appear like they’re going to get better! So I’m leaving to rediscover the magic Walt did years ago...I refuse to continue to make crap for Disney any longer. And if you guys want to, be my guests...but
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Bluth TV biopic 2:Meeting friends and making Banjo
BLUTH TAKES SOME PAPER AND A PENCIL AND PAUSES FOR A MOMENT STARING AT THE PAPER. HE SIGHS AND HAS A “WELL BLUTH, THIS IS IT” LOOK ON HIS FACE. THEN HE STARTS SKETCHING AND DOING HIS WORK FILLING IN THE ANIMATION. WE THEN HAVE A TIME SEQUENCE OF HIM WORKING ON DIFFERENT SCENES OF THE MOVIE. WE WILL SKIP OVER HIS COLLEGE YEARS AND THEATER LIFE AS THAT IS NOT ESSENTIAL, BUT WILL POSSIBLY MENTION IT LATER. WE NOW SEE DON WORKING ON THE SWORD IN THE STONE IN 1961, SIX YEARS LATER. THEN WE SEE HIM WORKING ROBIN HOOD IN 1973. DON IS WALKING DOWN HALL WHEN HE SEES FRANK OLLIE WORKING WITH A NEW IN BETWEENER. IT IT GARY GOLDMAN, DON’S FUTURE PARTNER.
BLUTH
Hey Ollie, who’s this?
OLLIE
Hey Don, this here is Gary Goldman. He’s our new in-betweener for Robin Hood.
GOLDMAN
Yeah, just started today. I hope that I’m good.
BLUTH
It’s really easy Gary. Trust me.
GOLDMAN SMILES AND RETURNS TO WORK. BLUTH WALKS OFF TOO. WE LATER CUT TO A LUNCH BREAK WITH GOLDMAN
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Bluth TV biopic 1: Beginning
A biopic miniseries that I plan to pitch to PBS this summer! This is the first draft and I'd love suggestions! Pray that this gets greenlit and we see Bluth's glory years on PBS!
THE DISNEY DEFECTOR
FIRST DRAFT
DECEMBER 25 2015
FRANK BENTLEY CORY
FADE IN:
A BARN IN EL PASO TEXAS YEAR 1937. CREDITS ARE PASSING ON AS CAMERA MOVES TOWARDS A LITTLE HOUSE. WE HEAR THE VOICE OF A WOMAN AS CAMERA IS MOVING CLOSER TO THE HOUSE. IT IS BLUTH’S MOTHER Emaline age 23
EMALINE
Virgil! Virgil!
IN ENTERS VIRGIL, BLUTH’S FATHER.
VIRGIL
(frantic as EMALINE is pregnant and due to give birth any time)
Yes dear?! What, what is it?!
EMALINE
Are Will and Jack back from the movie theater yet?
VIRGIL
Not yet dear. How come?
EMALINE
They promised they’d help me out today with my household duties with the baby coming.
VIRGIL
Oh honey, you leave those to me. I’m your helper. Not those two.
EMALINE
Dear, we already have seven children. They can help out around the house.
VIRGIL
I know dear.
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Case of the stuttering transformed pigs 2
That night, the two couples were eagerly waiting for that lawyer Goodwill guy to come and read that will thingy so that they could enjoy their place. It was storming like crazy, and there was water pouring....
“Just think.” Pam said. “We each have five showers! And a spa..giant plasma TVs...and our own private butler!”
“Oh I fired him.” Mindy said. “He asked for a tip.”
“What?!” PAm screamed. “Why you...”
Just then, there was a knock at the front door.
“Hello?” Dylan asked.
“Why it’s only me.” a sweet but super creepy voice said. “Your good friend Lawyer Chandler Goodwill. Won’t you Bushes kindly let me in?”
“Oh yeah, hold on.” Jackson said. HE opened the door and a powerful wind blew in the lawyer in. In entered a bald overweight man in thick eye glasses carrying a briefcase and....some food.
“Thanks for coming so soon Mr. Goodwill.” Dylan sai
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Hello, to anyone who's reading~. Since it's the Railway Series 70th anniversary, I wanted to do something for it. So I decided to remake the entire RWS with my own models I'm planning to make. 
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But then I seen
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Childlike Empress Extended refusal to Bastian NES3
Did you know that in an earlier draft of "The Never Ending Story 3", when Bastian asked why he couldn't just wish the lost Fantasians back, the empress gave him an actual reason other than, "No Bastian". Here it is for you all to see
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The very first story that I wrote is going to be revised in a little while to be more profession "The merfolk Tf of the baxter family" and being renamed "An undersea journey". And then I plan to write a fictionalized accoint where Mary Ford, a lady who Diseny rejected as an animator due to her gender gets revenge by turning Walt into a woman...and he learns a lesson!

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What's up ahead for me is I'm writing a free commission about a wife, her exe husband and twin girls who get turned itno Barbie dolls and a very loose retelling of the 1932 disney short "Babes in the Woods" to be titled "Officer babes in the Woods".

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For book project, if anyone can help me on how to find person I can sit with to sketch graphics concepts, pls let me know thanks
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Kyatia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016   Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave <3 Maybe check out my more recent stuff if you want <3
Watchers Mini 3 by Kyatia  
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Thank you for the adorable +fav! We’re glad that you appreciated how the drawing looked, I hope you continue to enjoy our work, as well sharing your thoughts! If you can, that is. =P (Razz)

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